November 19, 2009

What about the Families - Preview Clip

In this clip we see a combination of fades, layered text, continuity editing and voice over however this is only just a preview of our current work in progress and we would purposefully like to receve any extra constructive critism so that we can develop the clip more on Final Cut Express.

These are the advantages at present:
*Great Longshot - working with the rule of thirds
*Good Framing
*Good use of text - the fade and aesthetically it fills up the screen
(rather than just watching them walking in)
*There's no visible license plates :-)
*Good Low angle shot

Disadvantages:
*Minor camera movement
*The text comes in too quick - and the white makes it hard to read
*The timings of the Frames could be longer
*The textual question is abit extraneous meaning the audience can
already establish that it is the question - can be replaced with facts
*Audio can be smoothened and toned down